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I had a very good day. Finally I slept after school. I woke up at 10:00.1 washed up and went to breakfast. I ate eggs and drank tea. After that I started to watch the news on the Internet. Suddenly, I received a texted from my friend. He invited me to walk. We met at 14:00. We walked in the park and in the city center, it was fun. Since it was summer, I came home at 22:14 and went to bed at 24:00.

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2012-09-16T20:41:28+04:00

 I had a very good day. Finally I FELL ASLEEP after school. I woke up at 10:00.I washed up and went FOR breakfast. I ate eggs and drank tea. After that I started to watch the news on the Internet. Suddenly, I received a TEXT from my friend. He invited me to walk. We met at 14:00. We walked in  the park and in the city center, it was fun. Since it was summer, I came home at 22:14 and went to bed at 24:00.

 
2012-09-16T22:44:42+04:00

 I had a very good day. Finally I  went to sleep after school. I woke up at 10:00.1 washed up and had  breakfast. I ate eggs and drank tea. After that I started to watch the news on the Internet. Suddenly, I received a texted from my friend. He invited me for a  walk. We met at 14:00. We walked in the park and in the city center, it was fun. As it was summer, I came home at 22:14 and went to bed at 24:00.