Пожалуйста проверьте текст по английском для презентации. Плизз очень срочно . My ideal school. I would
like to tell you a few words about my ideal school. First of all If I were a
Headteacher of my school I would allowed everybody to have an opportunity to
use one's phone. I believe that the ideal school - it
is technically equipped classrooms , spacious and bright ,a sports complex with
a gym and swimming pool, workshops , greenhouses and laboratories.
Homework And again,
should be a minimum of compulsory subjects (especially in highschool ) and
homework because almost half of the day we spend in school and the other half
on the other classes. Time for homework is not enough. Holidays Our
holidays. I would like to travel a lot. But when? Our holidays must be a bit
longer I think.

School
uniforms

Schools
uniform in ideal school missing but it should not go beyond the bounds of
decency. School uniforms Schools uniform in ideal school
missing but it should not go beyond the bounds of decency.

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2014-03-20T14:50:15+04:00
Все очень хорошо написано и без ошибок, только тут нужно подправить: 
"Schools
uniform in ideal school missing but it should not go beyond the bounds of
decency.                                                                                                  School uniforms                                                                                                                 Schools uniform in ideal school
missing but it should not go beyond the bounds of decency." Нужно убрать подчеркнутое слово, оно тут ни к чему. Я бы сама хотела учиться в такой школе. 
2014-03-20T14:54:09+04:00
First of all... I would ALLOW everybody...
Homework - we spend almost half of the day in school