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My family likes to watch TV. Especially grandmother and grandfather. I seldom watch it, but mine we love channels it is THT and STS because they give a wide choice of various programs. Besides I like to watch animated cartoons and comedies because they lighten me mood. And here my father watches NTV. This channel broadcasts the international news. The father likes to learn new about our country. And mother on the contrary loves the First Channel and TNT because she likes series about love and reality show. The grandmother and the grandfather prefer to watch channels Culture and Sports +. The channel the Culture offers the big range of scientific news. The grandfather loves Sports + more, he likes to watch sports meets and безума from boxing. And when all of us together, we watch Muses of TV, it gives wide a choice to music!

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Моя семья любит смотреть телевизор. Особенно бабушка и дедушка. Я редко смотрю его, но мой любим каналы это ТНТ и СТС, потому что они дают широкий выбор различных программ. Кроме того я люблю смотреть мультики и комедии, потому что они мне поднимают настроение. А вот мой папа смотрит НТВ. Этот канал передает международные новости. Папа любит узнавать новое о нашей стране. А мама наоборот любит Первый Канал и ТНТ , потому что ей нравятся сериалы про любовь и реалити шоу. Бабушка и дедушка предпочитают смотреть каналы Культура и Спорт+ . Канал Культура предлагает большой диапазон научных новостей. Дедушка больше любит Спорт+, он любит смотреть спортивные состязания и безума от бокса. А когда мы все вместе, мы смотрим Муз ТВ, она дает широких выбор музыке!

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my family LiKE to watch tv.especially grandmother and grandfather.i watch it seldom and my favorite channels are TNT and STS because they can show us a lot of various and interesting programs.moreover,I like to watch comedies because they can do my mood much better.my father is in favour of watching ntv.this channel broadcasts international news.furthermore,my father likes to learn new facts about our country,
for this reason,he spend a lot of time watching different programs about it.my mother is in crazy about serials and tv shows.so,she like to watch first channel and TNT.my grandparents would like to watch scientific news,so they like culture channel.my
grandfather loves sport+.he is in favour of boxing.all my family like to listen music.for this reason we like mtv.it gives us many positive emotions
вроде бы все. я переделала много оборотов,но смысл остался тем же))

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2014-01-11T01:59:09+04:00
My family like to watch TV. Especially my grandmother and grandfather. I seldom watch it, but my favourite channels are THT and STS because they make it possible to choose any of the programs you like. Besides I like to watch animated cartoons and comedies because they lift my spirits up.
And, here is my father watching NTV. This channel broadcasts the international news. My father likes to learn new things about this country. O
n the contrary, my mother loves the First Channel and TNT because she likes series about love and reality shows. My grandmother and grandfather prefer watching channels Culture and Sports +. The channel Culture offers a big range of scientific news. My grandfather enjoys Sports + more, he likes watching sports events and he's just crazy about boxing.
And when all of us get together, we watch MusTV (MTV), it offers us a wide range of  music!