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our dancing collective traveled to France. it was in april.snow melted long ago and everywere bloomed peach trees and tulips. the highlight in this travel was the rise on the Eiffel Tower. it building was muchsmaller than I imagined. everywere police and cute trays with souvenirs. for tickets lined up a huge turn. because we had a lot of people, it was decided to climb on lifte. as soon as he touched the ground rapidly
became estranged. it was too scary. on the upper deck offers a beautiful view of Paris. it was evening and the sun went behind a haze over sunbathing lights homes. the tower itself exactly at 8 pm flashed with lights .
from afar it seems like sparkling flashes. we were all in awe of this kind of

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2013-12-01T19:54:36+00:00
Our dancing collective has traveled to France. it was in april. snow melted long ago and everywere peach trees and tulips bloomed. the highlight in this travel was the rise on the Eiffel Tower. it building was much smaller than I have imagined.  There are police and cute trays with souvenirs in the Eiffel Tower. a huge turn lined up for tickets. we have decided to accessible by lift . as soon as he touched the ground rapidly became estranged. (предложение вообще не имеет смысла) it was too scary. on the upper deck offers a beautiful view of Paris. it was evening and the sun went behind a haze over sunbathing lights homes. the tower itself exactly at 8 pm flashed with lights .(тоже неправильно)
from afar it seems like sparkling flashes. we were all in awe of it
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2013-12-01T21:36:45+00:00
Our dancing collective traveled to France last April. The snow had melted long before that time and peach trees and tulips were blooming everywhere. The highlight in this travel was the rise on the Eiffel Tower. The Tower was much more smaller than I had imagined before the trip. Everywhere there were the police and cute trays with souvenirs. We had to queue for tickets for a rather long time but it was worth it. Because we had a lot of people, we decided to get up by the lift. At  last we were up. It  was very scary on  the upper deck but  we could see an astonishly beautiful view of evening Paris. The sun had already gone and we saw the lights of homes. the tower itself  flashed with lights exactly at 8 pm .
from afar it seemed like sparkling flashes. we all were charmed by the sight.