Нужна проверка!
Буду благодарна =)
Nowadays many people think that a work is the most important thing in everybody’s life. Is it really the most important thing?
I agree with this statement. First of all, the work - the main component of our lives. It helps people realize themselves.Some people work hard to improve their self-esteem. Secondly, human life would be meaningless, passive without work. Finally,
if you work you have material wealth - money. It's great to feel an independence of anybody, if you earn enough money on your own.

а хотя... и так, и так можно))
ты молодец :)

Ответы и объяснения

Очень хороший ответ, как по мне. исправлять ничего не надо.