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Hunting learn to sing

And be master of the dance,

Beautiful to be able to draw,

And to achieve anything in life.

But the dream as a dream the past,

The other for a moment you've become,

And the smallest slightest,

You told the wonder of the world.

Her beautiful eyes,

Seeing the world turned upside down,

And soon I realized then,

Love is a hard war.

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