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I wanna talk about one my travel.I really like being away from home,because I feel

independence and I like it.Unfortunately I had more managing trips than trips for the rest.

In last year I have been in Moscow.I got there by train.It was economy carage and I was shoked.It was my first trip by train and I expected more.

I lived in Moscow one week in the guest house.A lot of my times I spent on the the conference but if I had a freetime I walk, see different attraction,meet with new people.The weather wasn't very sunny almast all days were very cold and rainy weather.

At the end of my travel I understood that I didn't like thid big city.I don't know why but I felt negative emotions relative this city.



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2013-04-21T13:18:33+04:00
2013-04-21T13:20:47+04:00

I want to tell about one of my trips. I really like being away from home because I feel myself independent and I like this feeling. But unfortunately I have trips for work rather than for pleasure.

Last year I was in Moscow. I went there by train.I went by economic class and I didn't like it at all. It was my first time I went by train and I expected more.

I lived there for a week in the guest house. I spent a lot of time  on the conference, and when I had spare time, I walked, went sightseengs, met different people. The weather wasn't sunny, almost all days were cold and rainy.

At the end of my trip I understood that I didn't like the city. I didn't know why but I felt negative emotions to this city.