Ребята,проверьте моё эссе на наличие ошибок.пожалуйста. Тема : Many people think that the best way to travel is by car.

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In our worls there are a lot of means of transport.One of them is by car.

In this essay I will name some of the advantages and disadvantages of travel by car.

The most common argument for is speed,which depend on type of car.I think that is very big advanture.When you travel by car you can look through the window.It's very pleasant prosecc if you like it.
In favour of disadvantages I can say that some ptople may have a sick.Travel by car is not really my kind of thing,because I have a sick,but it depend on beauty in the car.It sounds stupid but it is true.I can't put up with(терпеть) father's car,when we travel somewhere.I feel headache and sickness.But for my relatives all is good in father's car.
Evidently(очевидно) that this mean of transport not for all people,but if you like travel by car you have a good impressions from your trip.

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2013-04-20T22:08:59+04:00

in our world

лучше a lot of kinds of transport

one of them is car.

of travelling

which depends

that it is

process

people

travelling by car

it depends

beauty of the car

travelling or to travel

you have good impressions

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2013-04-20T23:34:14+04:00

In our world there are a lot of means of transport.One of them is a car.

In this essay I will tell you about  the advantages and disadvantages  of traveling by car.

 

The most common argument for this such of travelling is speed, which depends on the type of your (или a car) car. I think that it is a very big advantage. When you travel by car you can look through the window. It's a very pleasant process if you like it.
 In favour of  disadvantages I can say that some people may have a car-sick. Travelling by car is not really my kind of thing,because I have  a car-sick, but it depends on comfort  of the car. It sounds stupid but it is true. I can't put up with(терпеть) father's car, when we travel somewhere. I feel headache and sickness. But in the car of my relatives I feel much better than in my father's car.
Evidently (очевидно) that this mean of transport  is not for all people, but if you like to travel by car you'll have a good impressions from your trip.