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I Wake up at 7 in the morning. Brushing my teeth, eat Breakfast. Then go to school. After school I go home and have dinner. Afterwards I do lessons. At 18.00 I'm eating. After dinner I play computer games. At the same time I am reading a book. At this stage my day ends.


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I wake up at 7 o'clock in the morning. I brush teeth, have breakfast, get dressed and go to school. After classes I have lunch and go home.I play computer games till 6 pm. After that I have dinner and do my homework. Then I play computer games till midnight and go to sleep.                                 вот так! правильнее